2nd draft - FINAL

LONDON FASHION WEEK 

• I have showed my drafts to some friends to get some opinions and as expected they agreed that on this page there is too much white space. So, I tried to move a bit the info and added something else.  

• Instead of leaving that white rectangle, I added black background to white text and I do believe it looks much better. Yes, you can really see the faces of the people behind but their are not exactly important in this context.

• For this one, I felt I needed a bit more red so I added that shape at the top which I think looks cool. 

As a whole, I like how the article looks. I think it's consistent, loads of images to understand the atmosphere, it's red enough :) I might come back to it to change bits and bobs but as a whole I like it. I have never done anything like this so I am proud I managed to do this. :) I still need to add page numbers but I will do that at the next, when I know how many pages I will have. Right, neeeext!!!