Visit to the print space #2

The cover was ok. The images are not quite good but the cover looks very nice. 

This one was ok as well. It looks really good printed.

I need to edit the text as I said before and I also need to make it smaller as it way too big. The text shouldn't be bigger than 12p as otherwise it will look huuuge.

Right, for this one there is one image which is too dark so I need to change that. I need to do the table of contents properly. The text on the right with the contributors has got a 90% opacity so it's more like grey. I want to make all the text like that because black might be too much.

The image is too dark so I need to change that.

I need to replace 'their' by "her" and the opacity of the text should be 90%. Also, the second image from left to right is too dark.

The name of contributors are in bold italic. I will change them to italic. 

contributors + opacity

again one of the images that is too dark. I also need to move "The mysterious woman" a bit to the right.

90% and contributors

'The crafty woman' should be in the middle of the frame. On the right, there is too much space so I will move the contributors paragraph down.

image in the right - too dark

contributors

this one is ok.

OK as well

for this one, I need to move the triangle behind the images as they don't look good at all combined with the triangle.

there is a black shadow that I can spot - needs to disappear. Also, in the middle, the red shapes are multiplied but they need to be one on top of each other. 

this one is good.

same with this one

the images are too dark. the text is too big. 90% opacity

images too dark. might be too empty on the right

this one is ok

text too big. the contributors should be in the middle of the frame

text waay too big

this one is ok

change text. on the right, I need to change the "-" as they don't look aesthetically good.

this one is ok

same - ok

there is a lot of space between some words - need to get rid of that

the red shape on the left is quite big. on the right, the small frame is not positioned right as I can see  white space.

I need to make the red shape bigger as the text touches the margins.

this is ok.

contributors 

good

this is good

good as well

good as well.