This is how it looks now - the text is smaller, I edited the words as some weren't supposed to be there.
Because the text on the right was right from the beginning sort of greyish (90% opacity) I made all the text like that because 100% black would have been too bold. I didn't want it to be really striking. I changed the small image (#25) as well and even if in this pictures is still look dark, it's not.
I changed this image as it was too dark.
I changed the opacity of the text to 90% and the image on the right as it was too dark.(2nd from left to right).
I changed the opacity and also instead of having the name of the contributors in bold italic, I only went for italic because I didn't want it to attract attention very much.
I moved the frame a bit more to the right in the images with the mask + contributors to italic+ image is more lit now.
Because the image is on the center of the spread, I moved it to the right a bit to still be able to see her face after binding. Also, the contributors - I moved them down to cover a bit the white space and also because after binding the text would get lost.
90% opacity + contributors to italic
contributor to 90%
Because the images didn't look good at all, I moved the red triangle behind them to be able to see the images clearly without that redness. + text 90% opacity
I got rid of the shadows on the left as I didn't position the images correctly the first time. The shapes on the right are now one on top of the other and they look as one.
I only changed a bit the text on the right. I made sure the white text wasn't very close to the black background.
I made the text on the left smaller as the first time was waaaay too big. Also, I made sure the contributors are right in the middle of the frame. + text 90% opacity
I changed the images as they were too dark, made the text smaller +90% opacity. It looks so much better now.
I changed the images - too dark and I also added some text that I have forgotten about - some words that Stefi wrote about herself.
I made the text smaller on the left and on the right I tried to make sure there are no "-" in the text (actually, I have done that to all the text in the magazine). And I also tried to make it uniform - 90% opacity.
contributors to italic
I tried the same thing with the text on the left as in the image above.
for this one, I corrected the position of the small image on the right, I made the red shape on the left smaller and I made sure the text is uniform and it doesn't have any "-".
There was too much white space on the left so I moved both images a bit lower together with the text. I didn't want to move just the text as I wanted it to be together with the images.
I made the text smaller and it looks more readable now.
I made this text smaller as well.





















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