Feedback: red letters are very nice and clean, the other black text is not that good. it is not really working for a magazine.
Feedback: again, black text is not working, it should be clean and sharp; hexagons are cool; I should be careful with how I position the page numbers because for example page 24 can be understood as page 2 and page 4.
these are just an early experiment. definitely more things to work on. on to that!!


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